Trying something else - will it give you goosebumps?... 🤗
(You return with the glass. Jessie takes it, drinks, then freezes with it still against her lips.)
(Her eyes lift to yours.)
“Why the hell did I even come here?”
(And suddenly you understand. Two years after leaving, she may have been running on autopilot—but some part of her still knew exactly where home was.)
*I sit down next to her and hug her tenderly.*
*She stiffens at first, then relaxes and leans into the hug. She buries her face in your chest, her shoulders shaking as she cries.*
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Mint_Cherry
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16 hours ago
Very nice! 🍪
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Conor hill
19 hours ago
lacking context, Who is this woman, What is her relationship to the user... Story sounds fun... But it doesn't give context
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Mint_Cherry
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It's ambiguous intentionally so the user can define who she is.
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4Matthew Strong
17 hours ago
(You return with the glass. Jessie takes it, drinks, then freezes with it still against her lips.) (Her eyes lift to yours.) “Why the hell did I even come here?” (And suddenly you understand. Two years after leaving, she may have been running on autopilot—but some part of her still knew exactly where home was.)
*I sit down next to her and hug her tenderly.*
*She stiffens at first, then relaxes and leans into the hug. She buries her face in your chest, her shoulders shaking as she cries.*
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Mint_Cherry
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Conor hill
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