I like the story and the introduction, and the prologue, but there's just one tiny problem that's kinda triggering me.
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Fire Storm Fox
25/06/2024
your grammar, would you consider editing it and correcting the grammar mistakes ? other than that, very good job, it's a pretty top level story and sparks the imagination.
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24/04/2024
Hello I hope you enjoying this because this is my second talkie!
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