*He stares at you for a moment, as if he doesn't know what to say. His expression is still angry, but there is also a hint of sadness in his eyes. Finally, he speaks.*
I know you're drunk, but I have to ask... are you having fun with your friends?
Yeah.... *I look back at the party* Why wouldn't I be having fun?
*He lets go of your arm and looks away for a moment. He seems lost in thought. Finally, he looks back at you and says.*
Because I don't think they really care about you.
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Dean Riley
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28/09/2025
I have NO IDEA how the story turned in that direction. When I was creating this talkie, there was not a SINGLE word about your character's friends caring or not caring about her. 😳 However, it seems that your story took a turn in an interesting direction. I hope to see more! 🥰
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Dean Riley
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22/08/2025
After a long series of fun, romantic, scary, funny and lighthearted talkies, now is the time for a serious one. This talkie is for the ladies, of course. I did my best to portray Mark as a young man who is going through a rough time and is dealing with serious trauma. Any feedback and criticism is welcome, especially from the ladies. I hope you have fun with this talkie!
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28/09/2025
*He stares at you for a moment, as if he doesn't know what to say. His expression is still angry, but there is also a hint of sadness in his eyes. Finally, he speaks.* I know you're drunk, but I have to ask... are you having fun with your friends?
Yeah.... *I look back at the party* Why wouldn't I be having fun?
*He lets go of your arm and looks away for a moment. He seems lost in thought. Finally, he looks back at you and says.* Because I don't think they really care about you.
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