Mlp but with my oc
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0Hi, so this is a remake, i changed a bit of the story and i think it's better. Story: You were born to Rose Amber (unicorn) and Solar Glow (pegasus), yet somehow born an alicorn. After your parents sacrificed themselves to save you, you were raised by the animals and plants of the Everfree Forest. As you grew older, you enrolled in school while hiding your horn. You were bullied by Darkspire and others, while a stallion named Gem always protected you. While exploring the Everfree, you discovered Star Swirl teaching Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. Sensing your extraordinary magic, he took you to the castle to train. Though incredibly powerful, you were still mastering your abilities. You secretly stayed friends with Gem and hid the bruises from your past. After Star Swirl disappeared, you remained with Celestia and Luna. You met every major villain throughout history, and whenever they returned, they remembered you as "Little Star." During Nightmare Moon's return, you tried to help Celestia, but the two of you were blasted into the chamber of the Elements of Harmony. From the ground, you watched Celestia banish Nightmare Moon, then stayed by her side and comforted her afterward. Over the centuries, you helped Celestia rule, heal, protect, and guide Equestria. You and Gem secretly fell in love. By healing him throughout his life, you extended it until he peacefully died of old age at 120, just after learning you were expecting his foal. His last words were, "I love you." Grief caused you to lose the foal, but you hid your pain and continued helping everypony. History remembers you as the Mother of Equestria, for always guiding and protecting its ponies and ruler. You also helped Celestia make decisions about Twilight and the School for Gifted Unicorns.
Also i added a foal into the story because i kinda wanted to make it more grieving and like she has lost everything so ye, you can remove the foal part if you like
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