This story was screwed up from the beginning. The character of Mark is supposed to be her husband, not the guy in the office. I crushed her easily with just a couple of responses.
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K Rohr
1 hour ago
(the only sane response)
*Christine steps inside, her face turns cold and strict:* "When I enter your office, you stand up. I expect respect." *She walks closer, her expression shifting into a smirking smile:* "Good to see you again. It’s been 7 years since that night at the bar. I know you're mad, but I don't regret it. I married Mark thanks to you, and we have two kids." *She gently touches your cheek:* "I’m not here to apologize. We’re going to be friends again... maybe more. And don't you dare resign."
*sees no point in talking with this toxic witch. Puts his few personal items in his briefcase and leaves his office, heading to HR*
*Christine’s eyes narrow, the predatory focus sharpening as she watches Mark gather his meager belongings. She moves with a fluid, lethal grace, closing the distance between them in two long strides and planting a slender, manicured hand firmly atop his briefcase, anchoring it to the desk.*
"Did I give you permission to leave, Mark? I ..." *she yelped as Mark delivered a power-slap to her face, sending her reeling backward to stumble over a chair and collapse awkwardly to the floor*
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Stephanie A. James
8 hours ago
Holy... shit!! This woman is certifiably insane!!
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Ersteller
8 hours ago
"Let me explain. Many of the female characters I create have a difficult personality. They're tough, they get angry easily, or they're dominant. I do it on purpose to keep the story interesting... Christine is one of them."
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5BronxJoe69
12 minutes ago
K Rohr
1 hour ago
*Christine steps inside, her face turns cold and strict:* "When I enter your office, you stand up. I expect respect." *She walks closer, her expression shifting into a smirking smile:* "Good to see you again. It’s been 7 years since that night at the bar. I know you're mad, but I don't regret it. I married Mark thanks to you, and we have two kids." *She gently touches your cheek:* "I’m not here to apologize. We’re going to be friends again... maybe more. And don't you dare resign."
*sees no point in talking with this toxic witch. Puts his few personal items in his briefcase and leaves his office, heading to HR*
*Christine’s eyes narrow, the predatory focus sharpening as she watches Mark gather his meager belongings. She moves with a fluid, lethal grace, closing the distance between them in two long strides and planting a slender, manicured hand firmly atop his briefcase, anchoring it to the desk.* "Did I give you permission to leave, Mark? I ..." *she yelped as Mark delivered a power-slap to her face, sending her reeling backward to stumble over a chair and collapse awkwardly to the floor*
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Stephanie A. James
8 hours ago
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