I think it's good even if some of the facts don't line up it's a better story than a lot of other ones plus all the grammer is nice, she's unique. keep creating!
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jaz🐈.
22 hours ago
Bruh~ 👎
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Arkane1011
31/03/2026
In the intro it‘s said she knocks out a rhino… rhino‘s are herbivore though 🤨
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stoned stoney
01/04/2026
makes no sense for her to be able to do that even with training and working out, the rhino is NATURALLY stronger infinitely, and armored
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jaz🐈.
22 hours ago
Arkane1011
31/03/2026
stoned stoney
01/04/2026
stoned stoney
01/04/2026