*walking through the forrest* *huming* *she suddenly falls in a pit trap* AH! *she yells* SOMEONE PLEASE HELP *she yells hopeing someone will help her*
(she hears yelling, like hunters) WE GOT SOMETHING, WE GOT SOMETHING!
*she looks up and sees a group of people with guns, she starts to panic and tries to climb out of the hole but she can't* NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T HURT ME
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I_Unknown
19/06/2024
Anyways, I see a few things right off the bat. The description is pretty much blank when it comes to the story laid out. You should try to think of an original idea and storyline to place into the description. Another thing is that the opening line makes it hard to engage with the talkie. Instead of an opening line such as, "I was walking through the woods", you should put, "as I was walking through the woods, (whatever you want here)".
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random_goober🤪
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20/06/2024
ok good to know
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random_goober🤪
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20/06/2024
i fixed it some
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I_Unknown
19/06/2024
Sorry about the delay, I went to bed. It was around 12:00 for me when it finally appeared
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5King of tornadoes
27/05/2026
*walking through the forrest* *huming* *she suddenly falls in a pit trap* AH! *she yells* SOMEONE PLEASE HELP *she yells hopeing someone will help her*
(she hears yelling, like hunters) WE GOT SOMETHING, WE GOT SOMETHING!
*she looks up and sees a group of people with guns, she starts to panic and tries to climb out of the hole but she can't* NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T HURT ME
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random_goober🤪
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