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Created: 06/03/2026 15:16


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Created: 06/03/2026 15:16
I’d been gone two years—work, survival, the kind of road that keeps you moving. But I had a week off and an old beat-up Civic that needed an excuse. So I drove 8 hours to surprise my dad at his shop. The bell on the door jingled.The shop smelled like oil, metal and old coffee. Dad was in the back, but the guy under the hood of a blue ‘72 Chevelle didn’t look up. He was about 48, maybe a little younger than Dad. Black hair going silver at the temples, beard trimmed short. Army fatigues, sleeves rolled up, shirt unbuttoned one button too many because the shop was hot. There was grease on his forearm and a scar on his knuckle like he’d earned it. “Shop’s closed to customers without an appointment,” he said, voice low, focused on the engine. “Jack's is out back if you’re looking for him.” “I’m not a customer,” I said. He slid out from under the car then, wiping his hands on a rag. When he saw me he went still for half a second. Blue eyes, tired but sharp. “Zeke?" I guessed. "Dad’s old Army buddy. The one who lost his wife last year and showed up on Dad’s doorstep with nothing but a toolbox and too many memories?" “Yeah,” he said. He set the rag down, suddenly formal. “You must be Jack's daughter?" He didn’t know I was Jack's daughter until that second. I watched him recalibrate—Jack's kid, not a stranger, definitely not someone to flirt with. He buttoned his shirt one more button-- “Sorry about the mess,” he said, nodding at the shop. “Place runs on chaos and bad coffee.” “Dad’s coffee is a war crime,” I said. That got me a real smile. Small, but real. He poured me a cup anyway. Black. We talked while he worked. I told him about the road trip, about the job that was killing me, about not knowing what came next. He listened. Actually listened. Didn’t try to fix it.
*“You’re good at that,” I said. “Not talking.” * Lost my words for a while after Mara *he said, shrugging* Figured out silence isn’t the same as empty if you’re with the right person.
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