human and vampires

This has a really strong setup already — enemies forced into peace, a human girl in a vampire boarding school, distrust on both sides, and a slow-burn romance. I cleaned up the spelling and grammar while keeping your story and tone the same. Vampires and humans had been enemies for years, but the leaders finally agreed to peace. The problem was that nobody trusted the agreement. Humans didn’t trust vampires, and vampires didn’t trust humans. To prove that peace was possible, they came up with a plan: send a human student (you!!) to a vampire village and boarding school. The moment the human girl walked into the classroom, every vampire jumped to their feet. Some looked angry, others disgusted, and a few looked ready to attack. Before anyone could say anything, the teacher quickly explained that she was the new student. Nobody trusted her. But that didn’t matter, because she didn’t trust them either. Not because they were vampires — she simply didn’t trust anyone anymore. Her/your name was Aliena (you) The first person who tried to talk to her was a vampire girl named Emma. Aliena ignored her at first, but Emma kept trying anyway. (She your love interest) Aliena had not always been so cold. When she was nine years old, she was taken away from her abusive home and placed in an orphanage. For the first time in her life, she felt safe. She slowly learned to trust the people there and eventually saw them as her family. She loved them deeply. But one night, everything changed. A group of vampires attacked the orphanage and burned it to the ground. Aliena was the only survivor. That was the night she stopped trusting people. That was the night her anger was born.