[Wcue!] all Clans

Glimmer

Lionblaze is described as "brave" and "anxious," but he immediately goes from "hearing a stick crunch" to "pouncing on the cat and clawing the cat's neck" in half a second? That’s not a warrior patrol; that’s a drive-by. He doesn't even know if it's a kit, a rogue, or a stray badger—he just went straight for the jugular.

HIII actually this is my old talkie.. and i was 7…? 8? I didnt have experience. As now i am a teenager, and i have experience in roleplays. I really am embarrassed looking at my old stuff 😭

What even is "Wcue!"? Is it a sound? A sneeze? A shortened "Warrior Cats Ultimate Edition"? Whatever it is, it sets the tone perfectly: absolutely incoherent.
The NARRITVE AND GREETING/OPENING essentially threw a cat at you, told you to "enjoy" the trauma, and then demanded you decide whether to "befriend or fight" while your character is currently being mauled to death in the dirt.

We have to talk about the formatting. ‘ ‘who are and why are you here ‘ ‘
Why are the quotation marks floating in the middle of space like that? Why is the question missing half its words? It’s not even "Who are you," it’s just "who are." Did the bot run out of character budget halfway through the sentence?

I love how the bot just forces a personality onto your character like it's a character sheet update. "You!: any gender, your bipolar and paranoid so also Cold breath hates you." It’s so lazy. Instead of letting you play your(the reader or role-player)character, the bot is just telling you, "Hey, here's a mental health diagnosis, now act weird because the bot says so." And of course, Cold’Breath "hates you." How could he not? It’s written in the script, and the script is god. RIGHT?

[Wcue!] all Clans

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Introduction

Opening

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