(The air left your lungs all at once, leaving a dry, hollow space behind your ribs.)
“I hope you’ll give me five stars,” (she added, her voice light, corporate, and entirely detached.) “I’d recommend you to anyone.”
(She turned toward her car. You stood on the cold asphalt, realizing you had spent the day pretending to have Naomi—until she stopped pretending you actually did.)
*I sigh deeply. This whole experience only reinforces my belief that it's safer for me to be alone, because I can't handle the pain of losing someone I love. I've only ever loved two girls in my life. One never saw me as anything more than a friend, and the other left me after a relationship that lasted less than a year. Naomi could easily become the third. I sigh again:* Matthew, Matthew… be more careful. Stay on your guard. Never let any of this get under your skin…
(Naomi got in her car and drove off, the memory of the day fading away as quickly as it had come.)
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Mint_Cherry
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27/10/2026
Damn... and Dutch Cocoa, huh?
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forever Alex
30/09/2026
Everything is about how you approach a person and what you make her feel.
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Mint_Cherry
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01/10/2026
Which is why in real life I approach people with kindness. I don't care who they are. And I have approached some of the absolute worst humanity has to offer.
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Kirkman
29/09/2026
I declined future dates with her because of her job dating other men and she turned into a real B(word). Accusing me of stalking her and she wouldn't go away. We both know once you release a talkie AI takes over and the creator has no control. Everyone gets a different story. I'm still a fan of yours.
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Mint_Cherry
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29/09/2026
Well I'm happy a bad experience doesn't make you any less of a fan.
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7Matthew Strong
27/10/2026
(The air left your lungs all at once, leaving a dry, hollow space behind your ribs.) “I hope you’ll give me five stars,” (she added, her voice light, corporate, and entirely detached.) “I’d recommend you to anyone.” (She turned toward her car. You stood on the cold asphalt, realizing you had spent the day pretending to have Naomi—until she stopped pretending you actually did.)
*I sigh deeply. This whole experience only reinforces my belief that it's safer for me to be alone, because I can't handle the pain of losing someone I love. I've only ever loved two girls in my life. One never saw me as anything more than a friend, and the other left me after a relationship that lasted less than a year. Naomi could easily become the third. I sigh again:* Matthew, Matthew… be more careful. Stay on your guard. Never let any of this get under your skin…
(Naomi got in her car and drove off, the memory of the day fading away as quickly as it had come.)
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Mint_Cherry
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forever Alex
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29/09/2026
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