4 mistakes. 1: Capitalization. You didn't capitalize the start of each sentence or the names. 2: You used "your", which is possessive, not "you are". It should be "you're". 3: You added multiple spaces infront of the periods. 4: You didn't add punctuation to the end of the last sentence. (THIS IS TO BE TAKEN AS A JOKE, I'M NOT TRYING TO BE RUDE :D)
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6|~๊๐ฆช๐ค๐คฌ๐คฐ๊ฒ ๐ข๊๊ฉ๊ถ๐ค๐ค๊~|
09/12/2024
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09/12/2024
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