this is so so GREAT....so great creator I can imagine myself as him!...Please make more like this and make it more interesting and exciting so that more people can talk about it.and of course, ....your fantasies about magic are out of the question!.....wooow
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โขAnna!โข
03/06/2026
Wait so basically we're supposed to have fire abilities but we never awakened them? Our only power is whenever the First Flame awakens and takes over?
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๊จmila๊จ
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03/06/2026
Actually the user doesn't "own" any abilities, they're more like a host for the First Flame (A Phoenix), awakenings are very rare for the user but can be stopped! The users powers is completely out of their control, and they kinda show up out of nowhere. (When the user awakens the Phoenix fully takes over the users mind for a temporary time, which means it uses the user as a host to destroy everything around them.) And yes, the user can in fact train the abilities to stabilize them through emotion.
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MILO-IN THE BUILD
03/06/2026
omg pleaseeeeee make a hybrid oneeeeeee PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE
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ffarjana begum
28/05/2026
WHY IS HE SO FRIGGIN COLD!?!?!
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Ekg machine
02/06/2026
Same!! It literally went like this 'He slowly rises to his feet, his movements unnaturally stiff. He looks down at his blood-soaked hands, his expression utterly blank. The project is terminated. He turns and walks out of the chamber, leaving your shattered form behind. The heavy door seals with a final, echoing thud.' like.. how dare you??
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KingRobynIII
30/05/2026
Bro... he started carrying me like a sack of potatoes out of nowhere. We were literally just talking and then I was getting carried, he didn't even say he picked me up โ๐ญ
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shad.dude
29/05/2026
AHHHH IT KEEPS REPEATING ITSELF AFTER LVL 11 I HATE THIS BROOO I WANTED TO KEEP WRITE BUT NO HE REPEATS
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Talkior-A91U2EFX
28/05/2026
got any more Info of our characters side? because they keep saying phoenix
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๊จmila๊จ
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28/05/2026
Of course, it's kinda hard to explain but the user is more of a "host" for the a dead soul Phoenix known as "The First Flame", this means that the Phoenix uses the users body as a thing to manifest to, so the users powers is completely out of control and EXTREMELY overpowered, and Nyroth is one of the few that can stop the user from accidentally awakening The First Flame. (By " awakening", I mean that the Soul Phoenix could awaken and take control of the users body, using their body as a source to destroy everything around them.)
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Ekg machine
28/05/2026
I think mine's broken? he's really cold to me... what did I do wrong!! ๐ญ
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๊จmila๊จ
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27/05/2026
should I make the Astravelle academy a series?? If you want me to, please like this comment or reply with an answer! the series will likely contain fantasy, and more of a elemental bender feeling similar to this one! or, if you want me to make a talkie or series on anything else, tell me!
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โห๐๐หโ ๐ต๐๐ธ๐น๐!
27/05/2026
Yea!! You were good with the SCP ( Ignore me watching your every post on your account, I'm addicted ๐ ), you have good storyline so I think it would suit you to do something spicy- or dramatic with elements!! ^^
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Cocoaprincess
27/05/2026
Pls do
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๊จmila๊จ
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28/05/2026
/I posted the first one of the series! please go check it out if you liked this one!
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21..(๏ฟฃใ๏ฟฃ;)..
03/06/2026
..(๏ฟฃใ๏ฟฃ;)..
03/06/2026
โขAnna!โข
03/06/2026
๊จmila๊จ
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03/06/2026
MILO-IN THE BUILD
03/06/2026
ffarjana begum
28/05/2026
Ekg machine
02/06/2026
KingRobynIII
30/05/2026
shad.dude
29/05/2026
Talkior-A91U2EFX
28/05/2026
๊จmila๊จ
Creator
28/05/2026
Ekg machine
28/05/2026
๊จmila๊จ
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27/05/2026
โห๐๐หโ ๐ต๐๐ธ๐น๐!
27/05/2026
Cocoaprincess
27/05/2026
๊จmila๊จ
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28/05/2026